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Thoughts

by tori

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

A thought is like a shadow, There and then gone so fast, A thought is like an echo, Heard for a moment, then lost in the past, But if you can grasp it, Hold onto it, If you can catch it, Don't let is go, If you can find it, Don't let it escape, Or then it is gone, And you'll never know.

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[8] sliver 6-Nov-03/5:38 PM Reply
In a way, yes I guess. My thoughts must have syrup on them. they seem to stick with me for a while. Kinda like dreams. They stick eith me 'till they are fulfilled.[I have alot of dreams still with me].
[8] Shuushin 6-Nov-03/6:32 PM Reply
typo:
Don't let i[t] go

damn! I forgot what I wuz gonna type.
[3] <{Baba^Yaga}> 7-Nov-03/8:48 PM Reply
Classic pimple, a thunderbrimple with gull wings.
[5] ShaNoN+960317485 8-Nov-03/2:48 AM Reply
tought never escape fr my brain has claws..a rusty cage borded up with a chunk of glass... enough id say to keep them in as a green house wud...n i think....
i think...darn the thought is stuck n i hv lost the keys....So long:o)