poemranker ::The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s by horus8

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The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Jul 2003 · Edited 30 Jul 2003 · 5 comments

Zip Nadda Very little Wit Zero Penis Pussy Gusto Maturity Zombies Tone No, my friend wore a cape & whistled. When I was very young Possibly around my eigth year. There was this boy, a bit older than me that picked on me with a fervor unequalled 'till now. Unfortunately, last year, when I got to googling, you know, bored. I accidentilly found him and decided To appologize to him for both of us. Then, when I met him at a Dennys off of the 5 freeway to 'you know', "patch things up". We got along so well. That we ended up blowing off dinner for a drink. Drinks ended up turning into a motel room. A lovely one too, if I may add. We fucked like scientific anarchists. Afterwards, I got to not liking him so much again. So I choked him unconscious. Drained him of blood. Skinned him and then wore him for Halloween. Since googling is only as productive as your two hands, imagination, and will to kill, can make it. Thank you, see you soon.

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[9] SupremeDreamer 30-Jul-03/8:14 PM Reply
ahhh.. burning blood and gore curdles in the mornin for breakfast.. yeah..
[9] Lifeboatman 30-Jul-03/8:36 PM Reply
indecently delectable.. 9
[6] Thom 1-Aug-03/8:42 PM Reply
Have to see if I understand this: Some kid use to BEAT you, so you met him in a motel grabbed his SKIN and blew him for a drink, then you two fucked,in the name of science?
This trauma followed you since you were eight!

HELP IS AVAILABLE.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Thom 3-Aug-03/3:29 PM Reply
Ha!Ha! But. No, sorry, you missed the entire metaphor by the depth of Lake Tahoe. Nice try though. Perhaps, you skipped the title? Or it could be that you're unaware of the back story. Or that you're of a less than satisfactory reading comprehension level. What if I made the whole thing up, playing around with a friend of mine that I'm pen pals with? Perhaps, this is really about what I might do to you, whether you want to or not.
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 3-Aug-03/3:18 PM Reply
Very True Indeed. -10-