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Snowblind (Haiku) by horus8
Search party rescue With a detached retina Find what the wolves left


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.05
Weighted score: 6.952777
Overall Rank: 157
Posted: January 23, 2003 1:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2003 1:13 PM PST
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[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 23-Jan-03/2:05 PM | Reply
neat-o
[10] god'swife @ 209.179.137.217 | 23-Jan-03/3:36 PM | Reply
Get rid of 'with', change 'find' to 'finds' and then you have it. I feel this in my gut. 10.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > god'swife | 24-Jan-03/1:26 AM | Reply
Tell you what sis...i'll keep that in mind, and make those changes to this haiku, if i include it in my competitive poetry manuscripts for this spring and summer's contests. thanks.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 67.233.61.55 | 23-Jan-03/4:27 PM | Reply
I hate it when that happens!
[8] brazen @ 68.84.225.163 | 23-Jan-03/9:34 PM | Reply
ozzy!!!
[n/a] Imperfections @ 205.188.208.106 | 24-Jan-03/12:37 AM | Reply
Something about your word choice makes me conjure up images powerful enough to induce nausea. I mean that as a compliment, of course.
[10] wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167 | 24-Jan-03/12:44 AM | Reply
Care for some chai to go with the eye and liver omlet? Delicious. 10
[9] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 24-Jan-03/4:59 AM | Reply
Very cool. hey Horus this reminds me of Jim Morrissons poetry you should read it, this is in the same vein (retinal vein that is) *9*
[8] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 26-Jan-03/11:55 AM | Reply
ew :)
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