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A Simple Emote. (Pimple) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Crimson, dripping from Jaw Red, Black, Snap Sang drenched fist Full moon, Cold Stars Awaken from pure frenzy Shout, Rage, Primal Cry Animal Lullaby Devour, Feed, Substain Need Toxin, Flow, Ashes, Blow Bright Eyes, Dim, Darker

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.952381
Weighted score: 6.917265
Overall Rank: 208
Posted: July 28, 2003 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: July 28, 2003 11:23 PM PDT
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[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Jul-03/11:47 PM | Reply
an den? Gothic Blowjob and a cure sticker.
[7] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.166.225 | 29-Jul-03/2:03 AM | Reply
I liked the presentation.. 7.
[7] richa @ 81.86.245.194 | 29-Jul-03/9:08 AM | Reply
Nice but does the poem have a purpose/ a meaning
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 > richa | 29-Jul-03/9:21 AM | Reply
Yes, its about reacting to things. Some times we lose control and black out, only to find ourselves doing something we would never imagine. After the absolute fury, our inner beast is done, and the chemicals are gone, there can be nothing but remorse.
[6] lunar @ 195.92.67.71 | 30-Jul-03/8:04 AM | Reply
Too late! thats how it always is
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