Poemranker [Poem: plagiarism txt] [by daniella] Tue Apr 23 04:46:48 PDT 2024

[7] SupremeDreamer @ 66.81.149.142 | 30-Jul-03/7:54 PM | Reply

hmm. 7.

[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > SupremeDreamer | 30-Jul-03/8:19 PM | Reply

The "hmmm" must be the sound of your mind trying to figure out where you might fit in, somehow.

[7] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.168.151 > horus8 | 30-Jul-03/9:27 PM | Reply

what the hell horus, stop reading my goddamned mind will you? yes, actually, i was accused of plagiarizing.. accusation was given to Memoirs of a monk - St. Screamer on another website that i posted it on, which pissed me off. some fuck wit claimed i stole verses from some guy named stclair.. or whatever, and that i stole my name from a welsh writer.. which pissed me off since my name was chosen differently all together.

the url for this is here:

http://pub8.ezboard.com/fthecriticalpoetsmessageboarpostpoemsforheavydutycritique.showMessage?topicID=8691.topic

[7] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 > SupremeDreamer | 5-Sep-03/9:02 AM | Reply

so now I ask what has you flying ot these pastures new, eh? what can _The Critical Poet_ do for you that poemranker can't? Hell, we can even flag you a wanker for all to see an' it move you. :)

la.

[7] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.172.102 > nentwined | 5-Sep-03/8:25 PM | Reply

I have been at the criticalpoet for awhile now, the people there give more in depth suggestion and critique, offering revisions, etc, shit like that. Not saying its better than poemranker, or that i dont get good crit here, i just like getting a wider range of opinion etc.. im trying to improve my abilities in everyway possible.

About flagging me as a wanker, "for all to see an' it move you."

what, you think i actually stole lines from a 30 year old literature magazine i have never heard of? "an it move you"

move me? what, make me leave? wtf?

Saint Screamer is 100% my own creation. i didnt take the idea or verses from anywhere but my own poetic inspiration and if you dont believe me, i couldnt give a flying fuck. what are you threatening me for? hrmm?

[7] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > SupremeDreamer | 7-Sep-03/5:30 PM | Reply

As Saint HAL would say, "Calm down, Dave. Dave. Dave, calm down. Why don't you take a stress pill and think things over?"

[n/a] <~> @ 64.252.48.242 | 30-Jul-03/8:02 PM | Reply

oh, dear. quickly! a glass of amarone for daniella!

[10] impert&ent @ 82.36.27.74 | 16-Aug-03/11:56 AM | Reply

??
Style:
You do
work
not the poem
does include miscellany
for all that do
Please.
Submit
not
to the ranking.
poem's title rights or
Cancel posting
of poems not in a Poem
by your Title: retain.
Please post your other body
you belong

Submit

[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.200.163 > impert&ent | 20-Aug-03/5:26 PM | Reply

impert&ent you're too sexy for my fire. i would submit.

[10] impert&ent @ 82.36.27.74 > daniella | 21-Aug-03/12:51 PM | Reply

Hmmm.
I think I would change some of the lines to:
Style: work You do
not the poem

Do I get a spanking? Is that where the fire is?

[7] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 > impert&ent | 5-Sep-03/9:03 AM | Reply

Though I must say I prefer this one. You should submit it. :)

[10] impert&ent @ 82.36.27.74 > nentwined | 14-Sep-03/5:16 AM | Reply

Thank you. :) But I have submitted, and in a manner consistent with the discourse on plagiarism, by ensuring that Daniella gets credit for her creation, inspiration and at least part of the response to it.
In other words, the format of poemranker is open to play. Daniella started it with the rewrite, and I'm continuing it by posting (er, submitting) here.
after that, who knows? Maybe someone will make a poem that samples dialogue and spreads it across poemranker one line at a time. Would that be plagiarism?

[7] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 | 5-Sep-03/9:02 AM | Reply

cute.

[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.195.158 > nentwined | 7-Sep-03/9:14 PM | Reply

just love how submits become forums for discord and discourse.

[7] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > daniella | 8-Sep-03/6:05 AM | Reply

I find it a very interesting phenomenon, myself. :)

[n/a] daniella @ 200.59.164.75 > nentwined | 13-Sep-03/5:13 PM | Reply

tis, indeed

[2] suprembeaner @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Sep-03/5:26 PM | Reply

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