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20 most recent comments by SupremeDreamer (1001-1020) and replies

Re: a comment on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8 8-Aug-03/4:30 PM
Yeah.. he writes better stoned retarded
than what you can cough out
smoking Selegiline laced
zig-zag wrapped tabacky

chemical fumes can poison the lungs
and while horus puffs on wacky mary
you'll be a science project
a free enviromental lab stiff

them university slackers
kept laughin at that frozen
death mask, which looked
much like a washed up salmon


lips a deep purplish blue
the infamous painted hue
that is the trademark indication
of suicide.

A background report of this ghost
suggests that his lack of imagination
was what drove him to suffocate

humanity rejoices in his death
that left him unable to procreate.
thankfully in failure he managed
to serve a purpose, as he is displayed
refrigerated, in the human hall of evolution.

Smoke that SuckyHoe,
im sure you know
how to hold your breath.
Re: a comment on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom 8-Aug-03/3:37 PM
I know, im skull-fucking-fantastic. ;]

Your welcome, I guess im your sadistic muse.

Btw, thats $3000.00- We Accept Visa/Mastercard.
Re: Weeping Willow by LuckyJoe 8-Aug-03/2:26 PM
Nice note about "The bottom just sounds copied and forced to be something it doesn't want to be."

"The lake of tears slap"

Lake of tears? can you use some like... imagination?
the top can never be what it wants to be, even at the top, due to it being fattened with worthless cliche crap like that.

"Alone it stands,"

my god.. yeah, that really was an original way to see it.. this needs some style..

looks like it should be titled:

A Poet Weeping on a Pillow...

Stop whining, god thats fucking boring.. skull fuck me to death amazing, i almost blinked.. but no.

I passed out, and i was on meth.. no offense, just my lil ole opinion..

Other than that, its worth an 8, so thats your blessing.

go in peace..

Re: a comment on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 8-Aug-03/2:00 PM
educated? thanks, now i really feel special.. about me being in office, thats news to me.. and whats wrong with the "set" (whoever that includes..) of educated fucks? compared to american politics, things here make more sense.. -shrug-
Re: a comment on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 8-Aug-03/1:47 AM
Well.. its just my dreamer way of voicing my opinion.. notice that i didnt include your first two stanzas.. those were good.

then you started talking about some goddamn wheel and shit, and im sitting there thinking: Man, this guy got some pretty good drugs.. because i don't have a clue what you were trying to do or what message you wanted to express.. bleh..

Good choice, retaliation isnt a good idea, bitching turns me into a demon and i really start shooting rockets at your work.

and about toke the snake, i know.. that was a fucking stroke of genius i had when i needed to fit my mini-parody into your rhyme and form, i succeeded in keeping it focused on a funny rant about masturbation.. im actually quite proud of myself.. ;)
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme 8-Aug-03/1:28 AM
Yeah dark.. his response makes you look like a wanna-be top notch dullard... because, frankly, his father-figure act was the most brain numbing response i have ever seen.. id read your witty crap comments for the rest of my life if i had only you and yo-yo as my choices...

And you called me a twit.. heres someone that could actually use your brain surgery. enjoy the microscopic inspection of his brain.. you'll get so bored you will commit suicide.. but your not masochistic as far as i can tell.
Re: a comment on Phantom Space Adventure by SupremeDreamer 5-Aug-03/3:48 PM
cool. ;)
Re: My own Truism by Billy Fights 5-Aug-03/2:11 AM
cmon.. this is like, what, a fourth grade poem? 4.
Re: a comment on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos 5-Aug-03/1:04 AM
actually it is possible to smoke what has already been smoked.. pot heads know this, since when they are out of money they delight in extracting resin from their pipes to smoke and get high from. It actually works.

heh, just some interesting, or completetly stupid information.
Re: Satyrs and fluting the teachers by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Aug-03/3:15 PM
lol.. nice. hey, btw are you going to point me to the url of that manly p hall essay or what? I mean, i hate being teased and cheated out of an interesting read.
Re: a comment on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote 4-Aug-03/3:08 PM
banal i can understand somewhat.. imitative though? of who?...
Re: a comment on Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww 4-Aug-03/2:51 PM
ok master.. i shall calm my emotions and by wary of my thoughts.. i will suffocate the flame of hate and show compassion. ;)
Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww 4-Aug-03/2:20 PM
"They even planned my funeral."

Jesus christ you stupid bitch, didn't i tell you before that me and horus didnt plan it, it was simply a sudden thing that HAPPENED.

Fucking crazy whore acts as if it was a godforsakened conspiracy to destroy her bipolar dynasty..
Re: a comment on American Eden by Don-Quixote 4-Aug-03/2:06 PM
The Mad Potter was my favorite of that trio, thanks for posting the urls.
Re: American Eden by Don-Quixote 4-Aug-03/1:34 PM
hey.. thanks everyone for the corrections and such, including suggestions and grammar notations.. very helpful.
Re: a comment on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote 4-Aug-03/4:15 AM
oh fucking great.. now i have to buy more books.. cmon, im not made of money, i do admit his topics do strike a chord in me, but i need a free source for his writings...
Re: a comment on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote 4-Aug-03/4:04 AM
perhaps you would like to point me to a url of that essay.. or should i do my hacker majic and delve right into it..?

And, about one of my parents having a divinity complex.. i dont agree there.. and i wonder where you got this idea.. but im sure you will atleast clue me in on this sooner or later, or ill comprehend perhaps when i find this essay.
Re: a comment on American Eden by Don-Quixote 4-Aug-03/3:59 AM
the poet stanza, i agree it doesnt fit, but the ghost stanza.. cmon, thats a fucking masterpiece, and works beatifully in it.
And about potentially fucking it up, i dont fuck things up, trial and error just makes me succeed, its just a matter of time, and i dont take long to jump to the next level..

now, really, i want to know why you think the ghost stanza doesnt work.. id love to hear this, because we are basically energy, everything is a form of energy.. and we are children, some of us teenagers, and very few are old wise teachers.

And looking at history, 90% of humanity is still in kindergarten.. a long torturouse path of evolution that makes me think most of us are autistic or simply crazed retards.

do you disagree?
Re: a comment on Reptilian Evolution by DreamerSupreme 3-Aug-03/6:51 PM
the narrator didnt taste him, please think before you speak.
Ok, custard is sweet..
mustard is pungent..
its a black/white metaphore of change
get what im saying?
Re: a comment on A Reporters Saturday Headline Review by Don-Quixote 3-Aug-03/6:46 PM
ah.. ok, since we are on that one, and i childishly snapped over this subject, i guess we should discuss it.

First, what exactly do you mean when you say i have a divinity complex? I want to be sure i understand that repeated statement before we delve into this.


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