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Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Today I grabbed a cross made of paper and began a symbolic march
With a pen stabbed in my right side and crown of irony digging into my
brow
With clothes pins they hung my burden to flap in the breeze
Paperclips stabbed through my ankles and arms to pin me to place
They told me take it back
Stop speaking your mind and how you feel
Nothings gonna happen if you do
To which I replyed what would that prove
So here I stand, a simple mockery
A modern day martyr for watered down Ideas
Staring you in the eye and laughing
Is this the best you can do?
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.857143
Weighted score: 6.852551
Overall Rank: 308
Posted: August 7, 2003 1:36 AM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2003 1:36 AM PDT
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Its time to move onto some fresh wounds. 7
Stop speaking your mind and how you feel"
you mistaken the physical for the mental
digesting my comment with the literal
comprehension that a monkey does posses
your pink fluffy dress
is soiled from mud stains
it is all that remains
of your furry armor.
cmon man, really, you should think more about what your eyes read.
Your welcome, I guess im your sadistic muse.
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