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My own Truism (Free verse) by Billy Fights A girl once loved me but I didn't see it
I once loved a girl but she didn't care
I love another and she loved me
But apparently it wasn't ment to be
These kinda things make you wonder
They bring about all sorts of questions
Questions that don't have Answers
At least not answers we really want to hear
So instead we shout to a deaf God
Only to angry for lack of a reply
But the truth is that if we got it
We'd be scared shitless
Up the ladder:
I am talented & good looking damnit!
Down the ladder:
Emotion Dawns
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Posted: August 4, 2003 11:37 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 11:37 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.75 Overall Rank: 1810 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 69.19.177.232
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5-Aug-03/2:11 AM
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cmon.. this is like, what, a fourth grade poem? 4.
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223
> SupremeDreamer
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5-Aug-03/2:29 AM
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Maybe, but how many 4th grade poems do you see here? I'm really getting into childrens poetry for some odd reason.
Line 4- "meant" not ment
Line 7- is Answers supposed to be capitalized (doesn't add much, if it is purposeful) Line 10- I think you mean "too"
A wordy explanation for the obvious.
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