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Emotion Dawns (Concrete) by Nightmare-Poet
To find the sanguine moment
I pray to fully enjoy
My emotions shall light
The darkness I employ
In my loneliness
In my darkest hour
Shadows shall fall upon my fear
To release my inner most desire
I shall walk in solitude
Bare foot on dew moist grass
Under the fiery sky of dawn
In my hunger for compassionate embrace
The angels shall return a smile to my face
To return my loneliness to the past
To fall as a shadow across the ground
My dreams shall sail as a boat
Across the oceans of my mind
To the dawning sun of my destiny
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.75
Overall Rank: 1811
Posted: August 6, 2003 10:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2003 10:45 PM PDT
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