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Emotion Dawns (Concrete) by Nightmare-Poet
To find the sanguine moment I pray to fully enjoy My emotions shall light The darkness I employ In my loneliness In my darkest hour Shadows shall fall upon my fear To release my inner most desire I shall walk in solitude Bare foot on dew moist grass Under the fiery sky of dawn In my hunger for compassionate embrace The angels shall return a smile to my face To return my loneliness to the past To fall as a shadow across the ground My dreams shall sail as a boat Across the oceans of my mind To the dawning sun of my destiny

Up the ladder: My own Truism
Down the ladder: Color me Lifeless

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.75
Overall Rank: 1811
Posted: August 6, 2003 10:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2003 10:45 PM PDT
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[9] Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13 | 7-Aug-03/12:52 AM | Reply
lot's o' good lines... though I do not see the coherence... maybe I am just dumb (and I am, mind you)... but I see hope... 9
[n/a] richa @ 81.86.254.141 | 7-Aug-03/6:29 AM | Reply
I am always amazed at all the sad poems on here that employ nursery rhyme verse.
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Aug-03/6:36 PM | Reply
Felching can be steady work Ive heard.
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