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Emotion Dawns (Concrete) by Nightmare-Poet

To find the sanguine moment I pray to fully enjoy My emotions shall light The darkness I employ In my loneliness In my darkest hour Shadows shall fall upon my fear To release my inner most desire I shall walk in solitude Bare foot on dew moist grass Under the fiery sky of dawn In my hunger for compassionate embrace The angels shall return a smile to my face To return my loneliness to the past To fall as a shadow across the ground My dreams shall sail as a boat Across the oceans of my mind To the dawning sun of my destiny

Lifeboatman 7-Aug-03/12:52 AM
lot's o' good lines... though I do not see the coherence... maybe I am just dumb (and I am, mind you)... but I see hope... 9




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