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I am talented & good looking damnit!

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jul 2003 · Edited 4 Jul 2003 · 7 comments

Hi, I am talented and good looking damnit like an alter boy dashing nude across a lawn on Staton Island Hi, I am talented and good looking damnit more than an exploding cake that says "Happy anniversary Slut"! Then gives you a red bike, and a summer pass to Magic Mt. Hi, I am talented and good looking damnit In case you haven't heard I'm not one for one ply paper My hole serves the mighty word. LIKE: Poleposition Pitfall Kaboom Frogger Digdug Centipede Space Invaders Missile command Asteroids. Page schools Religion Chores Reunions Sunday School Mowing the lawn Capture the flag Ditch 'em Kissing. Hi, I am talented and good looking damnit Sometimes I think back to the day I decided to be, "Hi, I am talented and good looking damnit" and I wish I would have opted for "Hi, I am a talented and good looking serial killer, damnit, get in and buckle up".

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[9] david 4-Jul-03/1:28 PM Reply

The repetition in this piece is delightful and well-crafted. There are certainly many cases of repetition ruining a poem, but this certainly isn't one of them.

[8] Bill Z Bub 4-Jul-03/7:13 PM Reply

I saw an amazing movie last night.: "Frida". Ah, Salma baby, I don't know wether to salute or cry. Or both.

Hey do you ever stop writing? Didn't think so. Is okay if I tape this to my bathroom mirror and repeat it to myself every morning?

[n/a] horus8 › Bill Z Bub 5-Jul-03/1:27 PM Reply

Hey! How are you? I put a killer version of Angels & dinosaurs up at mp3.com. Let me know if you like it. I played all instruments, composed and produced it. I'm anxious for feed back.

Yeah Frida was a good movie, really good. "Talk to her" is the best though, or "Celebration" and the "Character". Two Danish flick I believe from about four years ago.

[8] Bill Z Bub › horus8 5-Jul-03/5:58 PM Reply

Great stuff, man. That's about the extent of my music criticism abilities.

I played bass guitar in a band in high school. The band had one gig, then broke up. They all wanted to play crappy cover tunes.
Thanks for the movie recommendations. Doubt my local video store carries them, but ya never know.

So, hows "sharkmouth" coming?
Heh.

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › Bill Z Bub 6-Jul-03/11:06 AM Reply

It's coming, your video store will have them "celebration" and "character" have you seen "dancer in the dark"?

[8] http://mulberryfairy 11-Jul-03/8:22 PM Reply

I thought it was spelled dammit. You learn something new every day. Nice refrain there in the middle.

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › http://mulberryfairy 11-Jul-03/8:39 PM Reply

It is.