Re: a comment on Pina Colada Belle by Don-Quixote	10-Aug-03/9:12 PM
yeah, i never knew so many people would see it as a feminine name when i decided to use it.. oh well. Clite/penis thingies? im no hermaphrodite ;P
Re: Happiness & Old Age by Caducus	10-Aug-03/9:02 PM
well done. 10.
Re: How we found Jesus by Jeremi B. Handrinos	10-Aug-03/8:59 PM
lmao. so when are you going to write a book? ;P 10
Re: a comment on 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy by SupremeDreamer	10-Aug-03/7:59 PM
eh, sure, but i consider my eyes to be emerald ;P
Re: a comment on Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme	10-Aug-03/7:56 PM
lol joe, your funny. ;)
Re: a comment on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer	10-Aug-03/7:54 PM
Plus, i went to my dictionary AFTER writing a first draft darkie, i dont need to shift through the dictionary while writing. ;P
Re: a comment on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer	10-Aug-03/7:50 PM
yes, your right dark, i can use a dictionary ;) and i dont have a problem admiting it. isnt that one of the points of poetry? to not use the same overused and crappy words that everyone else uses? eh? maybe i should of just used the less "sophisticated" words, and then i would have made a crappy 10 year old's poetry class submission. shut up,ok? im sorry your ego feels small when a 17 year old can do more shit with a dictionary than just sound smart by correcting peoples spelling.
Re: a comment on Pina Colada Belle by Don-Quixote	10-Aug-03/7:41 PM
lol, im male, 100%. if i start to grow a clit, ill tell you lmao. :P Don-Quixote means "dreamer". happy that you enjoyed it. it.
Re: a comment on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer	9-Aug-03/4:04 PM
heh. ;)
Re: Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer	9-Aug-03/3:14 PM
*sigh*... im quite happy with this one.. of course, please do point out any problems etc, that i didnt see, this one i want to perfect till it stands solid, unmovable. :)
Re: a comment on Weeping Willow by LuckyJoe	9-Aug-03/11:55 AM
"more apt to a lower mentality" lol.. kiddo, school doesnt have shit to do with a persons mentality, its about what they do in life, the shit they went through, the way they got throught it, and the lessons learned in the process.. And to be more precise, i was expelled. slightly different, long story anyway. simplicity? EXACTLY.. while the kiddos were learning about how rocks erode and struggling to read "How to kill a mockingbird" i was eating up the words of hermann hesse and his masterfull book Demian, examining philosophy and shamanism, along with studying entheogenic substances so intensly that i became a fucking human drug encyclopedia for anything psychoactive. And that was just on the side of learning the intricate workings of windows and linux, programming in pascal, C, C++, and ASM32, and being obsessed with computer security... And at that time period, i was writing poetry purely for my own soul.. something i have been doing since i was 13, and now i am 17, and i will turn 18 on sept 1. earlier on when i was 15 i attempted to dabble with other poets on irc rooms, but my writing didnt get far with that.. so i abandoned the adventure. I recently picked it up.. and started posting here. My first few works were laughed at, ripped apart, and pissed apon with extreme witty humor.. what did i do? i tried harder. i didnt sit there whining "its not how i wanted to write it" blah blah blah.. i fucking took up the challenge and started improving my work. thats says more than your stupid "it isnt what the poem was sposed to be" routine.. dont need my sympathy? im not being sympathetic you twat. And, btw, my "ideas" (which arent ideas, they are harsh critique) arent "profound". And i dont have any dislike of you personally in any way, shape, or fashion, im simply dissappointed in your lack of passion or seriouse work concerning your writing.. and then crying about how your poems are being destroyed.. pfffft. Im not sitting here rambling just to step on you, i can do that in alot more entertaining and insultive fashion... Im actually attempting to get you to wake the fuck up, and you sit there whining about how im an evil evil little man who wants to destroy your poetry... if i wanted to, id simply parody your stuff. Ask retaliate how evil i am.. his Myopic Labotomized Hubris piece got a mini parody from me in a comment.. he didnt sit there whining, or screaming stupid insults about it, the mother fucker said: ok smartass, ill make it better! And he did, he made his poem 10 times better than the original.. now thats how one improves his skill in poetry, by taking on challenges and learning his art from trial/error, and writing better and practicing till his pen is a sharped sword to do battle in the halls of imagination.. too bad your not upto the test, you wont even try.. tsk.
Re: a comment on Weeping Willow by LuckyJoe	9-Aug-03/9:45 AM
Attempt to use a dictionary and some simple reading.. thats all you need to do to go down that road of understanding our elitist code... "Talk to me like I'm human not Mr. Webster himself." you dont do any amount of work into bettering your writing.. you wont even try to figure out the meaning of simple words by typing in www.webster.com and copy/pasting a word or two into the dictionary box and reading the definition it gives you.. wow, you can utter excuses all goddamn day and do absolutely nothing to improve your writing/reading ability. look, its not hard, im a highschool drop out with terrible spelling and poor grammar, and im also an all star junky, ive done it all... but i still manage to understand those "extremely complicated" phrases... man, thats sad when the bottom of the barrel can do a thousand times better than you.. or maybe being a highschool dropout junky with terrible spelling and grammar has nothing to do with it.. hrmm? what do you think? eh? i really pity you..
Re: a comment on Weeping Willow by LuckyJoe	9-Aug-03/9:30 AM
"However at the same time some people need to look at the art in form rather than what they themselves want to see and believe the form should be." you dont get it do you? It has nothing to do with i think it should be you twit, im talking about HOW you write the damned poem. Your telling me you cant challenge yourself to do better than just burp cliche filled melodramatic poetic drool? Are you saying that attempting to take your writing to the next level will destroy your "style and mind set"? YOU DONT HAVE A GODDAMNED STYLE KID!!! thats why the stupid "mind set" of the poem is crap, and looks like a poem made by an 8th grade student. "Not saying any of mine are worth a shit..." They might be worth a shit if you actually challenged yourself to do better, then maybe you wouldnt have people ripping your shit up into pieces... stop crying about it and fucking evolve, or shut the fuck up and continue writing the same unartistic crap you've been fartin onto this site, thats ok by me, just dont do this whine routine.
Re: Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT	8-Aug-03/6:19 PM
Fucking good.. i really like this poem. 10.
Re: Memory by Hostileintent	8-Aug-03/6:07 PM
well written. 8
Re: Stalker by OnTheOtherHand	8-Aug-03/6:05 PM
Nothing like women to inspire a poets pen to write.. nice. 9.
Re: The Bunny, The Wench, and The Troll by Billy Fights	8-Aug-03/6:03 PM
Nice, but now who exactly is this directed at? eh? 9.
Re: a comment on Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate	8-Aug-03/5:54 PM
Alot better, my god, you actually injected more creativity and imagination into it! fucking magnificent. 10.
Re: Three Brothers by EAger to Offend	8-Aug-03/5:37 PM
not bad, not bad. Doesn't get my blood boilin though. blessed with 8.
Re: a comment on Three Brothers by EAger to Offend	8-Aug-03/5:35 PM
Hahaha. Yeah.. i can sure entertain the masses with these crazy asskickin sessions.. ;D