| Re: A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 |
18-Aug-03/1:45 PM |
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wheres the ultra violence? lol. 9
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| Re: a comment on Voltaic Buss by SupremeDreamer |
18-Aug-03/1:23 PM |
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-shrug- you into murder, im horny. so what? relax man.
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| Re: A Rose by LuckyJoe |
18-Aug-03/4:52 AM |
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skimming the surface, using the same old metaphors, roses, ice cream.. continue to dream, my sleeping beauty, till you find that your living a nightmare.. strike out motherfucker, be original.. or atleast put a new twist to old shit..
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| Re: a comment on null by Bill Z Bub |
18-Aug-03/4:31 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Drunken Poets Manifesto by Don-Quixote |
17-Aug-03/4:01 AM |
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murder. hrmm. well, good for you, how about i crank up the blood and write about rape and sodomy? ;)
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| Re: a comment on Sparkling Rust by SupremeDreamer |
13-Aug-03/6:44 PM |
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Thanks, what do you suggest for a title?
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| Re: a comment on Concieted Checkmate. by LuckyJoe |
12-Aug-03/5:45 PM |
I want you to melt down and stop trying.. i want you to start WRITING... from the soul mother fucker, not that crap, cmon now, a poet doesnt force it out, a poet lets it flow freely like a river.
im gonna push till that dam breaks and all that poetical juice floods out.
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| Re: Concieted Checkmate. by LuckyJoe |
12-Aug-03/12:54 AM |
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what good is chess pieces when i eliminated the board, stole the crown, and then made the kingdom laugh at your face? lol. cmon now, this was one big cliche.. chess.. THINK HARDER!!!!!!!! 4.
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| Re: a comment on The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
12-Aug-03/12:48 AM |
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yeah, i know. ;) 17 you know, more thoughts concerning fucking and less thoughts about killin. ;P
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| Re: The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-Aug-03/11:34 AM |
my pockets full of amt vials
thats sure to arouse smiles
as we druggie trip to saturn
ill watch the swirl of colors
frozen in a trance to learn
how to comprehend chaotic visions
of dancin purple men
making wicked incisions
into our skulls to then
suck the liquid out a straw
your soul seduced
pretty lips wide open in awe
as my rough fingers produced
yellow lightin down your creamy thighs
makin those lips breathe dreamy sighs
hopin my exploration discovers
pink tight lips
that'll be sure to make ya buck your hips
leavin you wantin more
depite no erection, dont worry, thats what viagras for
two gulps of rum to send them blue pills down my gullet
and ill ram it hard so you'll feel it
then at 2 am in the mornin,
i ditch the motel we fucked in
to continue explorin
the wonderfull realm of chaos
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Heres my entry.. there, i got balls.. but like i said, i dont write songs lol..
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| Re: Please vote zero by King Abdullah I |
11-Aug-03/10:47 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Street Prostitute: Dark Angel by Don-Quixote |
11-Aug-03/10:46 AM |
yeah, isnt it wonderful? ;P
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| Re: a comment on Pina Colada Belle by Don-Quixote |
11-Aug-03/6:34 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-Aug-03/6:21 AM |
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not that i dont have the balls, i just dont make songs.. -shrug-
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| Re: a comment on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer |
11-Aug-03/6:11 AM |
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so you want to whine a little more? eh? cmon, lets get you to ramble on and on about... absolutely nothing. you know what else does that dark? a parrot.
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| Re: a comment on Musings: Willow Sculpture by SupremeDreamer |
11-Aug-03/6:10 AM |
i didnt say you correct me all the time. Nothing in my comment said that, read it some more, obviously that intelligence of yours cant comprehend what you read. ;) cute, very cute, im fucking devastated.
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| Re: a comment on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
11-Aug-03/6:02 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
11-Aug-03/6:01 AM |
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you got a long and flexible tongue though.. and its very narrow at the tip.. ;P
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| Re: The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
10-Aug-03/11:36 PM |
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nice start, id finish it, but im no song writer. ;)
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| Re: a comment on How we found Jesus by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
10-Aug-03/11:31 PM |
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well, dont worry, editors that hold onto the old days will soon die gasping about them beautiful years back in 1930. Then they will be replaced by 20 year olds who dont mind the new stuff, and you'll be releasing your works to the masses.
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