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Voltaic Buss (Free verse) by SupremeDreamer
I recall that one late night in December
When I tasted those lips,
Taking sips of your sugar coated flesh
While we fondled in the dark.
I knew the time was right.
The cold gave us the excuse
to get closer, to get warmer.
You fed me air with your
Hot breath, I felt holy death
While my hands explored.
I plucked strings you
never knew existed,
and made you sing a song
in groans and grunts.
My teeth grinding, suckling those
Button peaks, turned pink;
You felt my shaft sink
Deep, within you.
You were a socket
Just waiting to be electrified.
One cold Christmas night
The time was right,
and I sparked your galvanic storm.
[murder... MURDER?? pfft.]
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Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7674
Posted: August 18, 2003 4:48 AM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2003 6:01 AM PDT
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