poemranker ::Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme

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Free verse № 60018

Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Aug 2003 · 8 comments

Saber-toothed kisses of peace are touted as I enter the cubicle city of my office building. Co-workers wave sweaty palms to communicate their ascetic politeness. Damned robots they are. They actually like the automat pink jello catered for us minimum wage beehive puppets. They appreciate every moment spent in this social prison, happy to be brown nosing the anal passage of the head manager. These proletariats snivel his toxic flatulence, inebriated by the possibility of a three dollar raise. My diacetylmorphine marinated body is thrown into a vinyl office chair. Tequila rolls in my desk drawer encased in a brown paper coat. 'Round noon-time I deserted the corporate stockade to smoke my zig-zag wrapped herbal green flora. Magic fungus clouds lace my bloody delta with elation, as I explore necromantic galaxies.

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[9] http://mulberryfairy 9-Aug-03/9:33 PM Reply
Yeah, I know what you mean. I was once a part of a cubicle community. I think you should call them proletarians. I didn't like the " 'round noon-time" part. I though noon-time was a New England saying (as if noon were something other than a time).
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › http://mulberryfairy 9-Aug-03/10:07 PM Reply
oh well, i was trying to add too many bells i guess. noted. thanks for the contribution of your opinion. ;)
[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos 10-Aug-03/12:09 AM Reply
Geez, that's what I call a snickers break.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › Jeremi B. Handrinos 10-Aug-03/12:33 AM Reply
thats what i call "hold on a second"
repeated ever two or so minutes
;P
[n/a] Joe-joe › DreamerSupreme 10-Aug-03/5:53 AM Reply
Oh what a profound inditement against the "social prison" of the corporate workplace where the "robots" carry out the orders of their opressors....bla bla bla. How creative....how profound!! In your next work please provide us all with enlightning news about the military industrial complex! Infintile....-6-
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › Joe-joe 10-Aug-03/7:56 PM Reply
lol joe, your funny. ;)
[n/a] Joe-joe › SupremeDreamer 11-Aug-03/4:56 AM Reply
I still love ya dreamster. Peace
[9] Lifeboatman 10-Aug-03/7:34 PM Reply
Anything with the world marlboro in it is great.. the ruby ones does it for me though.. 9.. yup.. robots