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Three Brothers

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Aug 2003 · 7 comments

Band of needing, each one bleeding, advise with words they've trouble heeding. Cuts infected, closely tended with wise words of unwise reading. Sound emotion, love unbended into bitterness is blended. Bloody chum was meant for feeding, billowing yet, unoffended.

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[10] INTRANSIT 8-Aug-03/5:59 AM Reply

You just described most rankers!

[n/a] EAger to Offend › INTRANSIT 8-Aug-03/9:45 AM Reply

Yah, I guess I did! Only, some rankers get pretty damn offended.
See the recent Joe Joe vs. DreamerSupreme fiasco. Now that's entertainment!

[10] INTRANSIT › EAger to Offend 8-Aug-03/12:56 PM Reply

You think that was good? You should see poetandknowit and horus 8 go fist-to-cuffs. Tyson got nuthin' on those two. love the rhyme scheme btw.

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › EAger to Offend 8-Aug-03/5:35 PM Reply

Hahaha. Yeah.. i can sure entertain the masses with these crazy asskickin sessions.. ;D

[n/a] SupremeDreamer 8-Aug-03/5:37 PM Reply

not bad, not bad. Doesn't get my blood boilin though. blessed with 8.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub 3-Sep-03/8:23 PM Reply

Three brothers... hmm...
...who are you?

[8] deleted user 8-Sep-03/10:02 PM Reply

Very nice! I love your structure and imagery!