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Three Brothers (Free verse) by EAger to Offend

Band of needing, each one bleeding, advise with words they've trouble heeding. Cuts infected, closely tended with wise words of unwise reading. Sound emotion, love unbended into bitterness is blended. Bloody chum was meant for feeding, billowing yet, unoffended.

SupremeDreamer 8-Aug-03/5:35 PM
Hahaha. Yeah.. i can sure entertain the masses with these crazy asskickin sessions.. ;D




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