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My Single Hatred (Free verse) by cleverdevice
As I lie, torpid on my bed Darkness consuming all, A single awareness makes itself known A dap, dap, dap, dap against the window. Instantly, I know what it is And I cower under the blankets, Desperatly hoping it will escape, But knowing all too well that it won't. What if it gets inside my shelter? What if it finds a gap? What if it flies towards my face And crawls inside my mouth. I shudder violently at that image. Wings leaving their dusty trail Across my lips. Legs scrabbling furiously across The roof of my mouth, Inching down my throat. Involuntarily I swallow, and wish I hadn't. I imagine it fluttering around inside my stomach. Butterflies in my tummy? Butterflies of the night, maybe. In a fit of anguish I leap up Turn the light on and thrash Wildly with a book, There, against the wall. Forlornly I look on, the wings spread wide, Legs twitching their last, The silvery dust gleaming. A black, oozing stain. A pity, I think. It would be quite pretty in the day. But I never could stand moths.

Up the ladder: Middleman
Down the ladder: missing time (revised)

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3129
Posted: August 3, 2003 2:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2003 2:45 PM PDT
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[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.165.132 | 3-Aug-03/3:26 PM | Reply
yeah.. i cant stand any insects myself. 8
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Aug-03/3:38 PM | Reply
"Butterflies of the night, maybe." YES! YES! GOOD CHRIST! Why didn't I think of that? You my friend have Swiss ovened yourself tepid. The last Butterfly of the night that I bumped into? Cocooned me inside of the darkness of my infernal internal struggle of pain and stuff, and let me just tell you... It was a fucking gag. Oh, shit, you meant a moth, my bad, what was I thinking? AH YES! about those butterflys of the night! Flee! run away!
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 80.225.178.201 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 4-Sep-03/2:14 PM | Reply
On the preponderance of Good Christs


Time was when there was only one Good Christ
He'd pop up here and there
But thanks to you awful kepels
They're appearing from thin air

Good gods may proliferate
Its omnipresent after all
But the amount of soddin Jesus'
Good Christ it just appalls
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