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My Single Hatred (Free verse) by cleverdevice

As I lie, torpid on my bed Darkness consuming all, A single awareness makes itself known A dap, dap, dap, dap against the window. Instantly, I know what it is And I cower under the blankets, Desperatly hoping it will escape, But knowing all too well that it won't. What if it gets inside my shelter? What if it finds a gap? What if it flies towards my face And crawls inside my mouth. I shudder violently at that image. Wings leaving their dusty trail Across my lips. Legs scrabbling furiously across The roof of my mouth, Inching down my throat. Involuntarily I swallow, and wish I hadn't. I imagine it fluttering around inside my stomach. Butterflies in my tummy? Butterflies of the night, maybe. In a fit of anguish I leap up Turn the light on and thrash Wildly with a book, There, against the wall. Forlornly I look on, the wings spread wide, Legs twitching their last, The silvery dust gleaming. A black, oozing stain. A pity, I think. It would be quite pretty in the day. But I never could stand moths.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 3-Aug-03/3:38 PM
"Butterflies of the night, maybe." YES! YES! GOOD CHRIST! Why didn't I think of that? You my friend have Swiss ovened yourself tepid. The last Butterfly of the night that I bumped into? Cocooned me inside of the darkness of my infernal internal struggle of pain and stuff, and let me just tell you... It was a fucking gag. Oh, shit, you meant a moth, my bad, what was I thinking? AH YES! about those butterflys of the night! Flee! run away!




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