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Charades

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

Charades ~ isn’t it nice to pretend but who is fooling whom have to say I wonder if it will end frankly though old words are filled with gloom ~ sort of wears thin after a while too much like work and almost like dealing with a child I was never quite aware of that silly quirk ~ in the end it’s all the same things are as they will be the charade such a silly game believe it or not it does sit well with me ~ I know I’m slow to catch on but not all that dumb after all my name is Thom I guess I come off that way to one ~ things will pass it’s moving along much the way I knew it would although I still recall the days of song and I would certainly speed this up if I could ~ pawns are the first to fall they’re easy to deceive the queen is the one to watch but all this is not so make-believe it’s just like getting a kick in the crotch

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[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos 1-Aug-03/8:40 PM Reply
Not if your pee pee is inside out, than it's like getting kicked in the cuntansnatch, which is a small village in Belgium, where that style of prick kick was first ritualised by homosapiens. I was on a dig when we made the discovery. Then, of course, i brought it back here to the ranker. For experimental purposes.
[6] Lifeboatman 2-Aug-03/12:40 AM Reply
sheeps...6
[4] SupremeDreamer 2-Aug-03/9:50 AM Reply
bleh, bored me dead.. couldnt even finish the first two stanzas before i wanted to ram my skull into my monitor and electrify my soul.. 4