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Charades (Free verse) by Thom
Charades ~ isn’t it nice to pretend but who is fooling whom have to say I wonder if it will end frankly though old words are filled with gloom ~ sort of wears thin after a while too much like work and almost like dealing with a child I was never quite aware of that silly quirk ~ in the end it’s all the same things are as they will be the charade such a silly game believe it or not it does sit well with me ~ I know I’m slow to catch on but not all that dumb after all my name is Thom I guess I come off that way to one ~ things will pass it’s moving along much the way I knew it would although I still recall the days of song and I would certainly speed this up if I could ~ pawns are the first to fall they’re easy to deceive the queen is the one to watch but all this is not so make-believe it’s just like getting a kick in the crotch

Up the ladder: Seduce Like Zeus
Down the ladder: This Is Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.125
Weighted score: 5.0336175
Overall Rank: 7227
Posted: August 1, 2003 7:51 PM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2003 7:51 PM PDT
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[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Aug-03/8:40 PM | Reply
Not if your pee pee is inside out, than it's like getting kicked in the cuntansnatch, which is a small village in Belgium, where that style of prick kick was first ritualised by homosapiens. I was on a dig when we made the discovery. Then, of course, i brought it back here to the ranker. For experimental purposes.
[6] Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13 | 2-Aug-03/12:40 AM | Reply
sheeps...6
[4] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.169.84 | 2-Aug-03/9:50 AM | Reply
bleh, bored me dead.. couldnt even finish the first two stanzas before i wanted to ram my skull into my monitor and electrify my soul.. 4
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