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Seduce Like Zeus

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Jul 2003 · Edited 21 Jul 2003 · 3 comments

So, into the pit of the sun I flung and finally let fly, and let bygones go by Oppressed under weary sigh, did I cry that this death I could not die was a lie. Now, at last this brutal noon, upon whence my direst lover should swoon, begat a thought both too late and too soon. That property of passion with it's toll so great that loomed in limbo swelled so fast and fragile Like a pin-cushion balloon. This fauna fantastica stretched and elastic was less Zeus's swan But, a loon.

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[n/a] richa 20-Jul-03/12:05 PM Reply
a thought too late and too soon ?
[8] horus8 21-Jul-03/11:46 AM Reply
I believe He would of stayed with the Euro.
[3] William Delacroix 10-Sep-03/6:29 AM Reply
I want to seduce Zeus's swan.