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Seduce Like Zeus (Free verse) by EAger to Offend

So, into the pit of the sun I flung and finally let fly, and let bygones go by Oppressed under weary sigh, did I cry that this death I could not die was a lie. Now, at last this brutal noon, upon whence my direst lover should swoon, begat a thought both too late and too soon. That property of passion with it's toll so great that loomed in limbo swelled so fast and fragile Like a pin-cushion balloon. This fauna fantastica stretched and elastic was less Zeus's swan But, a loon.

William Delacroix 10-Sep-03/6:29 AM
I want to seduce Zeus's swan.




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