Re: My concept of existence by Prince of Void	31-Jan-05/6:31 PM
What is this amassed hubris of catch phrases and vague nonsense? An expression of chaos? Even anarchy has a hint of form, a subtle rational, a sense of direction. When will you grasp that concept?
Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	31-Jan-05/6:20 PM
The beginning is cliche, in other words, and can be noted in countless other pieces. It's not exactly plagiarising, but zodiac likes to get the rankerfolk all rawled up... It's good fun, getting people all defensive... anyway, you can do better than that.
Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere	31-Jan-05/6:05 PM
Sure is more creative and solid than the usual-- "I hate you, you bastard, stabbed me in the heart, I'm stronger, don't need you, you'll regret dumping or cheating on me, blarg, blarg, etc, etc." I almost gave up the hope that somebody would put some thought into an "uprooting" poem. Blessed with eight.
Re: a comment on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	31-Jan-05/5:52 PM
Dunce, Dimwit, Dullard, Half-wit, Nit-wit, Twit, Changeling, Cretin, Simpleton, Fool, Idiot, Imbecile, Moron, Dolt, Pudden-head, Fuddy-duddy, Gasbag, Windbag, Nudnik, Platitudinarian (for your thesaurophilac moments), Fuckhead, Shithead, Pinhead, Blockhead, Bonehead, Knucklehead, Loggerhead, Lunkhead, Muttonhead, Dunderhead, Numskull, Lame, Lamer, Boob, Doofus, Dope, Dumb-bell, Dummy, Muggins, Nincompoop, Idiot Savant, Ninny, Sap, Scatterbrain, Sheepling, Underling, Tomfool, Subnormal, Twerp, Jack-ass, Fag, Stupid, Wally, Bow'ls and finally, (*whooo*) RETARD. Maybe that'll give you more variety when feeling the urge to say "your stupid" in an intentionally "baffling" way so as to allow your victim to offer emphasis to your sentiments. Wally? You fuckin homo.
Re: a comment on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	31-Jan-05/5:31 PM
Why does that comment have such a sarcastic effect on me... spank my ass, stop kissing it. Or atleast get down, dirty 'n constructive. Throw me a freakin bone here man. Ten has lost its almighty value due to an efflusion of counterfeit. (curse my verbosity cane...)
Re: a comment on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	31-Jan-05/5:23 PM
Thank you for not kissing my hairy pimpled ass with a ten. I felt like no one was going to be honest, or objective with the critique... trying to balance it out with Darkie regurgitating his rotating list of english idioms for the phrase "you're retarded." isn't all-together pleasant. It's pitiful when you get tens for something you wrote which you yourself can not rate higher than eight. Feels like folks are proffering gifts of peace to curb my wicked mood swings from belittling their posts. I think I'm due for a general public ranker flogging... Darkie keeping vigilance with his embrowned maturity harness queers the otherwise benefitial by-product of the whole ordeal.
Re: Devil, Devil, Hear Me Pray by PsydewaysTears	30-Jan-05/4:41 AM
Not bad, not bad, but I have some edits to suggest: 1st Stanza-- Devil, Devil, hear me pray, listen close to what I say. 2nd Stanza-- I would pay you to tempt me with your clever little lies, offer me your cruel malice wrapped up in a cherry pie. 3rd Stanza-- Devil, Devil, hear me pray; keep my sobbing eyes at bay. 4rth Stanza-- I would beg you to smite me As only Lucifer himself could. I deserve to suffer much more Than merely being understood. 5th Stanza-- Devil, Devil, hear me pray; teach me the wisdom of your wicked way. 7th Stanza-- Devil, Devil, hear me pray; take me, take- take my spirit away: 8th Stanza-- If I can not make you do to me what you must, I'll offer my soul to you with a single direct thrust. Consider them if you feel so inclined. Blessed with seven.
Re: The Difference by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Jan-05/7:02 AM
Amen.
Re: a comment on #28 by Lifeboatman	26-Jan-05/6:59 AM
Do you call everything that you can't understand "Shakespearian"? It's poetic use of greek mythology... not too hard to follow, even if you don't know greek mytho, look up the gods mentioned and you should be able to gather the gist and direction of the arrow mam. Nothing personal, I'm no fan of Shakespeare either, but it's not the dreaded Achilles heel of my existence, Zeusian electric grudge aside, that it personifies that which bewilders me.
Re: thoughts on a long lazy day by francis nor capule	26-Jan-05/6:18 AM
evanesced auspice. There goes a suggestion from my asshat sir.
Re: Birth by Caducus	26-Jan-05/6:13 AM
Left trembling my friend.. shrivelled from shivering. Ten. PS: Last stanza is sublime, I just love it. "pulled from the cunt of life..." Fucking brilliant.
Re: Ode 2 2Pac by PodPoet	26-Jan-05/6:05 AM
Our troubles gone? what? eh? Hay, fate has a funny sense of humor, as for racism plugging ears, "Rapping the words we're afraid to hear", After 2pac went down, Eminem snatched the torch and blazed an inferno that leaves makavelli consumed, drowning in the ashes, his tombstone engraved with the title of "old skool."
Re: Lonely People by april fool	26-Jan-05/5:56 AM
Schizo life gets old when your pals reflect the split persona which is you, yourself, twisted and torn in the delusion of "them". But anyway, you gave me a few giggles, so have a seven.
Re: "I" became "We" by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.	26-Jan-05/5:39 AM
If this were posted as a pimple, I'd be inclined to say that this poem is "brilliant", and created by one who has the pen-stroke of a genius.
Re: Memphis Skyline by wilco	26-Jan-05/5:30 AM
-Nods- Shaky but I can still groove. Has a slight villanelle feel to it.
Re: Paedophile at st catherine's by Mona Lisa	26-Jan-05/5:27 AM
Sounds like you should pitch this as a Public Awareness Commercial...
Re: a comment on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams	26-Jan-05/5:14 AM
All is lost, therefor all that is is merely shit hurled in order to postpone the inevitable. Are we at war? Do you want a jester trophy as a peace offering? Want me to do the asshat charade in order to assist you in demonstrating how ignorant, pathetic, and ultimately insignifigant I am? Are you not entertained?
Re: a comment on the pretenders by PopoyMola	26-Jan-05/5:07 AM
Hail I, the accursed one, he who singularly personifies evil, the child of the fallen one, I who is the anti-christ.
Re: a comment on The Stone Seeker and the Stacking by darkshark	26-Jan-05/4:58 AM
I thought it was already established that I'm one of the obsessed, deranged, overbearing sort. And actually: I plucked that literary mag bit from Darkie... I'm morphing into a morose, aphotic moth. Fuck rainbows and pretty butterflies.
Re: a comment on The Stone Seeker and the Stacking by darkshark	26-Jan-05/4:53 AM
Divine perspective is assumed by that which is condsidered the almighty-- which according to most scripture is beyond comprehension. All-together your loved one is left in the shadow of Jehovah, which pretty much renders him as void. Now as to god bothering to remember all that each person was in life, that's simply assumed under the theistical asshat. Considering the assertion that the poem(s) are dealing with one you loved, who passed away, wouldn't it be more relevant to offer creatively your personification of him/her, what he/she meant to you, affected you, etc? http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=108181 Something which gives a hint of the poems basis... The above is an example, and mayhaps I'm generalizing, or have ideas or concepts stuck in a stubborn, narrow box, but that's my thoughts on your reply... Oh, and what a nice subtle touch of innuendo, your last final statement.. I'm a sucker for those that like romancing the stone.