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Lonely People (Free verse) by april fool Look at all the lonely people,
Paul McCartney wrote.
I thought about their plight,
through the sadness in his throat.
A light switched on before me,
as I trundled to my room.
I got an idea too,
which helped remove the gloom.
Schizophrenia! - I shouted.
To no one who was there.
Weâll give them lots of happy people,
inside their heads to share.
No more lonely people,
and I'm feeling very excited.
Thereâs a party in my head tonight,
and everyoneâs invited.
Up the ladder:
broken
Down the ladder:
Letting Go
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Posted: January 24, 2005 5:41 PM PST; Last modified: January 24, 2005 5:41 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4837 Comments:
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Dovina @ 205.184.70.141
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25-Jan-05/10:57 AM
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Wish I were schizophrenic. Sounds like fun. Seem better, though, to make it personal, not pitting it inside their heads, but talk about how it is inside the head of a schizophrenic.
Schizo life gets old when your pals reflect the split persona which is you, yourself, twisted and torn in the delusion of "them".
But anyway, you gave me a few giggles, so have a seven.
There's a party in my pants tonight,
and everyone's invited. I hope your all excited? 151 view(s)
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