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Lonely People (Free verse) by april fool

Look at all the lonely people, Paul McCartney wrote. I thought about their plight, through the sadness in his throat. A light switched on before me, as I trundled to my room. I got an idea too, which helped remove the gloom. Schizophrenia! - I shouted. To no one who was there. We’ll give them lots of happy people, inside their heads to share. No more lonely people, and I'm feeling very excited. There’s a party in my head tonight, and everyone’s invited.

Dovina 25-Jan-05/10:57 AM
Wish I were schizophrenic. Sounds like fun. Seem better, though, to make it personal, not pitting it inside their heads, but talk about how it is inside the head of a schizophrenic.




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