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"I" became "We" (Free verse) by *.*ReAdY To SnAp.*.
I was always picked last for any sports, I have been made fun of from all sizes and sorts. I've loved many people, but been hurt by more, I've been through too much, my heart is torn. I think I'm going to give up it just wasen't meant to be, That god could create someone so special for me. I met you on a halloween night, and suddenly I knew, That "I" would become "We" and we would become best buddies. We have so much fun together, We hang out no matter what weather. We have been made fun of just like any other kid, We have made mistakes, we have made sins. We have been through much as friends, We have stuck together to the end. We have been friends, since that night, We will be friends to till the end of life. God is very special and means a lot to me, Just like Katelyn, who was sent to rescue me. Never give up God's got something up his sleeve, Just look at this friend and you'll see what I mean!!

Down the ladder: Dying Candle

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6222
Posted: January 25, 2005 4:27 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2005 4:27 PM PST
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[8] Shuushin @ 68.237.134.145 | 25-Jan-05/5:19 PM | Reply
I like these - I'm not keen on the god theme (and I noticed you capitalized it here, and not on the last one) and I think it would be fine without it - but hey - it's your thang.

Carry on.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 66.248.82.95 | 26-Jan-05/5:39 AM | Reply
If this were posted as a pimple, I'd be inclined to say that this poem is "brilliant", and created by one who has the pen-stroke of a genius.
[n/a] *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* @ 65.93.137.250 > SupremeDreamer | 10-Feb-05/1:59 PM | Reply
Thank-you SupremeDreamer I just don't know how to post it as a pimple now that it is submitted without deleting the comments..........Lindsey...
[8] Dan garcia-Black @ 69.236.20.55 | 26-Jan-05/7:38 AM | Reply
Never give up.
God's got sumpthang, etc. -8-
[0] Doug @ 65.32.114.161 | 26-Jan-05/1:43 PM | Reply
This is a joke,right?
If not please seek help -
Such as english 101 or some kind of therapy.
[n/a] *.*ReAdY To SnAp*.* @ 67.71.31.181 > Doug | 9-Feb-05/1:24 PM | Reply
Whats your problem Doug if you dont like my poems dont read them
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