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My concept of existence (Other) by Prince of Void The difference is killing me ..not related to my poem ?!
My concept of existence into the particles of the light
Beyond the all chaotic mass of light
Beyond understanding of mankind
I called it Madness of reaching infinity
I feel an inner voiceâs calling on for reunion
With whom I devoted my own existence
If I gain mortality but I will achieve my own love
The love is insight to see the vision of his face
If mind canât fathom any longer
The heart can fathom forever
For what I couldnât understand
Taking steps to love
Up the ladder:
Escaper
Down the ladder:
time (3rd draft)
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Posted: January 31, 2005 9:11 AM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2005 9:11 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.976287 Overall Rank: 8272 Comments:
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not related to my poem ?!
What is this amassed hubris of catch phrases and vague nonsense? An expression of chaos?
Even anarchy has a hint of form, a subtle rational, a sense of direction. When will you grasp that concept? 233 view(s)
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