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My concept of existence (Other) by Prince of Void
The difference is killing me ..not related to my poem ?! My concept of existence into the particles of the light Beyond the all chaotic mass of light Beyond understanding of mankind I called it Madness of reaching infinity I feel an inner voice’s calling on for reunion With whom I devoted my own existence If I gain mortality but I will achieve my own love The love is insight to see the vision of his face If mind can’t fathom any longer The heart can fathom forever For what I couldn’t understand Taking steps to love

Down the ladder: One Voice Remains

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8233
Posted: January 31, 2005 9:11 AM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2005 9:11 AM PST
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[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.168 | 31-Jan-05/9:11 AM | Reply
not related to my poem ?!
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 66.2.5.19 | 31-Jan-05/6:31 PM | Reply
What is this amassed hubris of catch phrases and vague nonsense? An expression of chaos?

Even anarchy has a hint of form, a subtle rational, a sense of direction. When will you grasp that concept?
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