| Re: SANATORIUM by Tahlia |
12-Jul-03/3:59 AM |
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ah, yes, beautifull.. flows to my soul.. 10. ;)
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12-Jul-03/7:54 AM |
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Over used rhyme, very little detail and imaginative writing... I've seen millions that look just like this. Don't get all pissed over my opinion, I'm just going on the quality of the poem. Blessed with a two.
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| Re: Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy |
12-Jul-03/7:59 AM |
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Pretty good read, managed to make a roach interesting to read about. blessed with 9.
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| Re: The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend |
14-Jul-03/11:08 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Jul-03/11:12 PM |
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Its definately my type of coffee... black and bitter, sugar cubes dissolved in destructive fury, its knife the blade of a water fountain. 9
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| Re: A Brand New Eye by EAger to Offend |
14-Jul-03/11:17 PM |
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| Re: In the Vicinity of Dreams by Blue Magpie |
14-Jul-03/11:22 PM |
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| Re: SILENT ECHOES by Tahlia |
14-Jul-03/11:36 PM |
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Amen, Amen... thou art blessed with 10.
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| Re: Death In The Cherry Brook Nursing Home by scitz |
15-Jul-03/6:43 AM |
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Sid is such a bastard. 8 shall be thy blessing.
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| Re: Death In The Cherry Brook Nursing Home by scitz |
15-Jul-03/7:28 AM |
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bastard is the term i use for this particular type of person.. because its a dead man walking like a ghost, im not trying to be an ass ;/
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| Re: rainday by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jul-03/7:47 PM |
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I liked this poem, cept "survivalling".. its just strange.. 9
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| Re: Scarecrow by horus8 |
15-Jul-03/8:03 PM |
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are you going to make an mp3 out of this? id love to hear it. 10
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| Re: -=Dark_Angel=_ fucks his mum With Stephan Robbins' face by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
15-Jul-03/8:04 PM |
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hrmm... that vegetarian line sounds out of place for some reason...
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| Re: a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
16-Jul-03/10:18 PM |
Um.. cmon you damned lil pink rodent, you should be improving, not writing the mumbles of a sickened rabbit suffering poetic rejection... 3
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| Re: Humans by snjofridur1 |
16-Jul-03/10:23 PM |
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lol.. well.. repulsive, slightly amusing and well written.. 7.
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| Re: Slip by Terence |
18-Jul-03/8:56 PM |
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| Re: Paean by Terence |
18-Jul-03/9:03 PM |
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Its a cute lil piece, the only thing i really liked was the oyster/pearl bit.. reminds me of a poem i wrote when i was 15. blessed with 8. welcome to the ranker!
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| Re: beyond sences by calilegzzz |
18-Jul-03/9:06 PM |
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I like it.. but i think it could have been better written/presented. 7.
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| Re: Federales by Bachus |
18-Jul-03/9:09 PM |
The rubber glove snaps
As I bend to touch my toes
Liquid burritos
-- i love this stanza.. ;P 9.
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| Re: Mistaken Paradise by DJCARTER |
18-Jul-03/9:47 PM |
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alas.. if this was written better, i would love it.. but im forced to bless it with 7, not higher.. ;(
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