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Slip (Free verse) by Terence A glint of gold
In dark of night,
Like diamond cold
In anthracite,
Flashed bright then
When it now regresses.
Sweet young girls
In summer dresses
Beckoned me
To warm caresses,
Joy sublime
And light young fingers.
The rushing sea
For no man lingers.
Cautiousness
I cast aside:
I lingered not
For time nor tide.
Up the ladder:
Pomona with a best friend
Down the ladder:
Being Mute
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.714286
Posted: July 18, 2003 1:58 AM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2003 8:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.729984 Overall Rank: 1846 Comments:
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Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154
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18-Jul-03/4:32 PM
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GQT.
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Terence @ 213.122.207.211
> Jeremi B. Handrinos
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19-Jul-03/1:54 AM
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What does "GTQ" mean?
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.168.76
> Terence
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19-Jul-03/4:31 AM
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Golden Q-tip Award, i think.
Damn good writing. 10.
This is great. Inventive rhyme scheme and phrasing, and such great images. This is inspiring.
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