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SANATORIUM (Free verse) by Tahlia All too often time
eludes us,
graves are dug
before their time.
Minds are jailed
in tombs of madness
never too forget...
Words unspoken,
faces touched,
lips of colour
once embraced,
bodies wrapped
in lust and longing
an interlude
in needless haste
all now lost.
Just shattered pieces
of what, was once,
supposed life;
Whispers now, distorted figures
no beauty fills these halls
of pain;
Minds of regret
watch walls
in blankness, wondering
if only....
Up the ladder:
PLAYMOBIL
Down the ladder:
Prison Dinner 'Lady'
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Posted: July 12, 2003 3:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2003 3:55 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2573 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.169.47
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12-Jul-03/3:59 AM
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ah, yes, beautifull.. flows to my soul.. 10. ;)
quite simple but clear with a few interesting lines
I think to say minds are jailed in madness is not warranted. And if it is you have not argued it overall pleasant though 168 view(s)
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