Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

PLAYMOBIL (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton
DEATH OR GLORY,THERE THEY STOOD,PLASTIC WITH SMILEY PAINTED FACES. AT A CHILD GOD'S HAND,THEY WAITED. DEATH OR GLORY,THEY BATTLED,PLASTIC WITH SMILEY PAINTED FACES. THEN IT WAS DONE,BACK IN THE BOX,OBLIVION. AND THERE THEY WAITED.

Up the ladder: duality
Down the ladder: SANATORIUM

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 01
.. 00
.. 31
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2572
Posted: April 26, 2003 12:38 PM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2003 12:38 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-Apr-03/3:34 PM | Reply
Tidy.
[8] richa @ 195.92.168.170 | 27-Apr-03/5:03 AM | Reply
this is good
One of your own technical structures?
222 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001