a Waste of Space

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Jul 2003 · Edited 30 Jun 2004 · 10 comments

This is a blank page Empty Or at least it was Til some fuck thought he'd get creative and go and fuck it up Now fucking look at it Its wasted The potential The Possibilities This could have be the best fucking piece of literature every written Now Look at it Its been raped Ravaged by my pen Every thing it had fucking going for it GONE Stolen Eaten by emotion Lost are the great messages it could have had Untold stories could have been told Instead some twit scrawled a bunch of meaningless words They hold no Value Again they mean fucking nothing So whats the point? Why the fuck are you even reading this shit? I'll tell you why Cause despite the fact that I'm saying nothing You can't help but look for something Bugger There were no pretenses made here None of my arrogant pointless lies and endless driveling madness This is pure and simply a waste Look for something if you must But all I got to say is fuck This is nothing more than a rant without rhyme or form Written to take up space But you read it anyway...

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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 16-Jul-03/2:03 AM Reply

"There where no pretenses made here" were, Bugger'd. I wont even bother fixing your attempt at spelling 'rhyme'. I can only wonder if god had the same idea when he put you here.

[3] SupremeDreamer 16-Jul-03/10:18 PM Reply

Um.. cmon you damned lil pink rodent, you should be improving, not writing the mumbles of a sickened rabbit suffering poetic rejection... 3

[n/a] JoyLuck 17-Jul-03/1:45 AM Reply

lol??

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › JoyLuck 17-Jul-03/2:59 AM Reply

Well thats what it should have been, but apparently not.

[0] tolstoyleo 30-Jun-04/4:30 AM Reply

I made a word: pop-tarded.
It's my nice way of saying retarded.
I really liked this poem. I liked it so much, I printed it out and used it in place of my toilet paper.
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[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › tolstoyleo 30-Jun-04/2:12 PM Reply

I'm glad you saw enough artist value to my words to be inspired to paint with them. What could make an artist more proud than to inspire his or her peers. Oh and pop-tarded, if you'll check with the fine people at Kellog's, as been a word since 1968, invented by a young President Bush Sr.'s grandmother, when describing what not to do with an infant(apparently he wasn't paying much attention at the time), her false teeth fell out but the senile old bat rabbling on. Pop Tards Founder and CEO, Eric Dick, Marketed his generic brand, of another modern day toastable breakfast, until cicra 1974, when his wife Exposed him to the IRS for Tax Fraud and the Michigan based company went bankrupt.

Good Day!

[0] tolstoyleo › thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-04/10:13 PM Reply

You are a dumb mother fuck. My word was: pop-tarded. The word you speak of is: pop-tart.
Clearly 2 sepearte words. Mine being a concatenated word based on two words, yours being the fact that you are pop-tarded.
good lick to you and your "work"

[5] Dovina 30-Jun-04/1:22 PM Reply

Yes, I read it anyway, and it's as good as most of what's come down lately.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › Dovina 30-Jun-04/2:20 PM Reply

Show me a better Meta Poem. Just one. Then, say its "as good as most of what's come down lately". Either your stating that have no basis what so ever by which you judge the writings of others, thus making everything eqaul and the same or, that everything "coming down lately" is as thought provoking or entralling, this is to say the least almost impossible to anyone other than a 6 year old, which would merely prove that once again, you have no basis by which to judge writing what so ever.

<3 Jason

[5] Dovina › thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Jul-04/9:05 AM Reply

You over-compliment me. I mean only that I get as much out of this as from most of the other poems I've read here lately.