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a Waste of Space (Other) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

This is a blank page Empty Or at least it was Til some fuck thought he'd get creative and go and fuck it up Now fucking look at it Its wasted The potential The Possibilities This could have be the best fucking piece of literature every written Now Look at it Its been raped Ravaged by my pen Every thing it had fucking going for it GONE Stolen Eaten by emotion Lost are the great messages it could have had Untold stories could have been told Instead some twit scrawled a bunch of meaningless words They hold no Value Again they mean fucking nothing So whats the point? Why the fuck are you even reading this shit? I'll tell you why Cause despite the fact that I'm saying nothing You can't help but look for something Bugger There were no pretenses made here None of my arrogant pointless lies and endless driveling madness This is pure and simply a waste Look for something if you must But all I got to say is fuck This is nothing more than a rant without rhyme or form Written to take up space But you read it anyway...

thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jun-04/2:20 PM
Show me a better Meta Poem. Just one. Then, say its "as good as most of what's come down lately". Either your stating that have no basis what so ever by which you judge the writings of others, thus making everything eqaul and the same or, that everything "coming down lately" is as thought provoking or entralling, this is to say the least almost impossible to anyone other than a 6 year old, which would merely prove that once again, you have no basis by which to judge writing what so ever.

<3 Jason




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