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I Dream Angel (Free verse) by horus8
I dream angel and the eternal questions In dog years through owners and collars Cheap wine and loose women; figments of some idea's imagination from calumet puffs and war -- upon horses freed to run. I dream angel for the children of a lesser God Bigger for living without legs or beauty or love My faith sings through the night like a hunting - - owl; ancient, silent, wise on wing, talon, sight but blind I am to the pulse of my maker. I dream angel for he that eludes me with flash and tempest, tragedy. My brother fire will never not dance -- will never not eat at the chance to spread. My sister the foam and the wave, yes, the Sea, so big as to forget me, and her own creation. I dream angel for you that watches me fight chaos Marduk the Tiamet. You loved me as a boy and fed me at the lake my lady sweet lady with hands like a warm statue you gave me my sword You gave me my dream, said, "Angel... Awake." I dream angel, have purpose, teach the words in magic symbols crowned hyacinth I dream many things, then those dreams begin to dream. I dream angel, heart, blood, feather But will dreams really make this better.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.090909
Weighted score: 6.0454545
Overall Rank: 1221
Posted: May 18, 2004 1:44 AM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2004 1:51 AM PDT
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[10] SupremeDreamer @ 66.52.155.64 | 18-May-04/5:19 AM | Reply
This is your best work yet, in my opinion- it touches my soul, and I can relate to it. I'll be stickin this one in my favs.

Blessed with ten.
[8] titan69 @ 62.31.28.251 | 18-May-04/11:26 AM | Reply
hello pall is me your old mate T69
see your still trying to wright peoms?!!
althugh i hate to admit it this is quite good. 8/10
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