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a Waste of Space (Other) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

This is a blank page Empty Or at least it was Til some fuck thought he'd get creative and go and fuck it up Now fucking look at it Its wasted The potential The Possibilities This could have be the best fucking piece of literature every written Now Look at it Its been raped Ravaged by my pen Every thing it had fucking going for it GONE Stolen Eaten by emotion Lost are the great messages it could have had Untold stories could have been told Instead some twit scrawled a bunch of meaningless words They hold no Value Again they mean fucking nothing So whats the point? Why the fuck are you even reading this shit? I'll tell you why Cause despite the fact that I'm saying nothing You can't help but look for something Bugger There were no pretenses made here None of my arrogant pointless lies and endless driveling madness This is pure and simply a waste Look for something if you must But all I got to say is fuck This is nothing more than a rant without rhyme or form Written to take up space But you read it anyway...

Jeremi B. Handrinos 16-Jul-03/2:03 AM
"There where no pretenses made here" were, Bugger'd. I wont even bother fixing your attempt at spelling 'rhyme'. I can only wonder if god had the same idea when he put you here.




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