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beyond sences (Free verse) by calilegzzz when you see,not with your eyes
you see
When you hear, not with your ears
you listen
When words never spoken,
pass through your lips
Is when the truth those words shall be.
Up the ladder:
Jenny Jones, Jenny Jones
Down the ladder:
Summer Rain
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Posted: July 17, 2003 5:39 AM PDT; Last modified: July 17, 2003 5:39 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9103527 Overall Rank: 9657 Comments:
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Terence @ 195.157.153.253
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17-Jul-03/7:03 AM
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A very mysterious 6 for you, I think.
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calilegzzz @ 65.103.142.64
> Terence
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17-Jul-03/10:36 PM
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A good mysterious or a not so good one?(hehe)
This is very Yoda-like. I don't think I believe I word of it.
I am afraid I feel some what sorry for you then, to believe my poem would mean you have experienced it as well.....there is still time!!!
pardon, where are you anyway
As in geographicaly speaking or mentaly speaking?(hehe)
At first I was going to glue this to my neighbor's face, but then I enjoyed your finally.
I like it.. but i think it could have been better written/presented. 7.
Thank you, and I have to agree with you. I never really was happy with it it dosent really flow the way I would like, but I do believe it was a bad day and I really wasnt "flowing" realy great either. It is one I will be returning to at a later date!!
I certainly will be happy the day i see it improved. ;)
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