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beyond sences (Free verse) by calilegzzz

when you see,not with your eyes you see When you hear, not with your ears you listen When words never spoken, pass through your lips Is when the truth those words shall be.

calilegzzz 19-Jul-03/12:48 AM
Thank you, and I have to agree with you. I never really was happy with it it dosent really flow the way I would like, but I do believe it was a bad day and I really wasnt "flowing" realy great either. It is one I will be returning to at a later date!!




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