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Death In The Cherry Brook Nursing Home (Haiku) by scitz
Edna died last night, But few have noticed, Sid steals her chair.

Down the ladder: It's A Long Way From Heaven

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.7
Overall Rank: 1956
Posted: July 15, 2003 6:42 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2003 6:42 AM PDT
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[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.171.123 | 15-Jul-03/6:43 AM | Reply
Sid is such a bastard. 8 shall be thy blessing.
[8] richa @ 81.86.240.142 | 15-Jul-03/7:22 AM | Reply
Sid isn't a bastard, bereft of innocence and idealism he has embraced pragmatism. This happens in old age.

oh yeh and poem is good too
[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.171.123 | 15-Jul-03/7:28 AM | Reply
bastard is the term i use for this particular type of person.. because its a dead man walking like a ghost, im not trying to be an ass ;/
[8] god'swife @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Jul-03/9:52 AM | Reply
Life is for the living, and when you're old a comfy chair is worth the loss of a few principles. Nice flow, succinct.
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