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Death In The Cherry Brook Nursing Home (Haiku) by scitz Edna died last night,
But few have noticed,
Sid steals her chair.
Up the ladder:
11th September (a senyru)
Down the ladder:
It's A Long Way From Heaven
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Posted: July 15, 2003 6:42 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2003 6:42 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.7 Overall Rank: 1956 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.171.123
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15-Jul-03/6:43 AM
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Sid is such a bastard. 8 shall be thy blessing.
Sid isn't a bastard, bereft of innocence and idealism he has embraced pragmatism. This happens in old age.
oh yeh and poem is good too
bastard is the term i use for this particular type of person.. because its a dead man walking like a ghost, im not trying to be an ass ;/
Life is for the living, and when you're old a comfy chair is worth the loss of a few principles. Nice flow, succinct.
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