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SILENT ECHOES (Free verse) by Tahlia The words that I utter, in sarcastic critique.
Shall be the pebbles,
on my path of tomorrow.
You do me no wrong, your âmistakes,â
are my own...
reflection.
Mirrored image of verbal deception,
professing my own silent failures.
In this vast expanse, my universe,
let me learn of myself, not at others expense
remembering...
Everything
echoes
me.
Up the ladder:
Interview with a Steven King
Down the ladder:
far but close
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Posted: July 13, 2003 10:12 PM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2003 10:12 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.888889 Overall Rank: 1494 Comments:
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Rodavlas @ 198.138.190.84
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14-Jul-03/8:08 AM
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a blip of emotion..extend.
yes nicely put together
nice.. it's easy to see its beauty in its simplicity.. <8>
Amen, Amen... thou art blessed with 10.
Don't like the ... after own; mis-leading. Edit out 'my universe'.
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