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far but close (Free verse) by KagatoSan I look out my window.
i see the sky, tis' a distant field.
remembering a girl,
like a widdow.
hurt so deeply.
It was easy for him.
now hard for me.
She is, like the sky,
so far from me.
Yet so close to my heart!
Up the ladder:
SILENT ECHOES
Down the ladder:
Make Music in Your Heart
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Posted: July 20, 2003 3:21 PM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2003 3:21 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.888889 Overall Rank: 1495 Comments:
A little lacking but reads well and the final three lines closes it well
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I look out my vagina.
i see the Dr., tis' a distant mustache.
Aiming at a girl,
with a pillow.
hung so testicularly.
It was soft for him.
but now it's hard for me.
She is, like a pie,
steaming in a window.
ready to get fingered!
like a pie
steaming in a window
ready to get fingered
ym.
though she really is also like the sky,
an alibi,
or a drive-by.
cut me down
in a hail of mary's