Re: Pagan ME King by proteusplum	6-Sep-02/1:37 PM
i shall hack you to bits and feed you to the birds; i shall bleary my eyes with the smoke of thy pyre; and i will spurt-spit ouzo into the ragingest fire for you, my liege!
Re: you first time in my sight by silvertongueddevil	6-Sep-02/1:01 PM
mmm mmm mmm
Re: Crop Circle by Lenore	6-Sep-02/12:54 PM
i like these sounds, but the damn movie has obliterated any objectivity i might have towards the subject.
Re: Our lord and saviour, the land of 60 million micks, as wonderful and noble as the pink empire. by ==Doylum	6-Sep-02/6:13 AM
well, now that you have a fancy new user name, i see the error of my ways, and retract my comment. forgive me, oh fancy-winged {--=D=--} i beseech thee
Re: Lines by OneFingerAnswer	4-Sep-02/10:29 PM
swank riddle.
Re: Zooidal Veldt by Wulf	4-Sep-02/9:11 PM
good idea, great conclusion. i'd like more punctuation to help facilitate understanding. even more, i'd like a solution
Re: Forbidden Love by beakism	4-Sep-02/9:03 PM
i think i'm in forbidden love!
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	4-Sep-02/12:48 PM
fuck it, h. if you're going to keep revealing our darkest secrets, i'm going to have to go back for some more electroshock. i know how much you liked it last time. you jess kepp yore little self still, and focused, on things that everyone enjoyed...cleaning up those smelly kneepads, for one
Re: God's Rod (toilet drink poem) by horus8	3-Sep-02/1:05 PM
upon reading this again, i feel the pull of the flush, sucking me into the vortex, the void. alas, my left nipple is dry...
Re: She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof	3-Sep-02/11:01 AM
maybe she'll--think of men waiting--to get in on it. personally, i prefer a higher man-to-woman ratio, but, what the hell.
Re: She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof	3-Sep-02/10:40 AM
hey, can i get in on this going-to-bed business? i'd not be missed...at least for a few hours, anyway.
Re: Black Heart by brazen	3-Sep-02/10:20 AM
well, almost. but i am a painter, and if i missed a stroke, i'd rub it out and repaint it or if it was dry by the time i saw it could be better, i'd overpaint it when it dried. michaelangelo repainted certain parts of the ceiling in the cistine chapel several time (esp. the hands of god and man); many many paintings upon examination (x-ray, cleaning) are found to have been changed from their original composition. this is what makes someone better--seeing how they can improve, and taking every opportunity to do so. i'm not trying to be 'right'; i recognize that you had something to say. if you feel like this was a learning piece, somnething to be looked back on as in, 'see how far i've come', why did you put it here? why not put up new experiments? and think on what others who actively write have to say? off the soapbox now.
Re: Evensong by Nicholas Jones	3-Sep-02/8:50 AM
so disappointing, to want to find more, and see only the architecture of men. i could never find god in a church, except, one time, at yorkminster abbey, when i heard the choir rehearsing, and felt the breath of something MORE than me...but then it was gone... ah, i may have to write about that. thank you.
Re: She Thinks Of Men Waiting by Christof	3-Sep-02/8:47 AM
funny to think of a benign medusa. funny to think that someone with looks so wild would worry what others think...
Re: Father O Father O Father of Fools by dougsoderstrom	3-Sep-02/8:43 AM
good imagery, but then some that disconnect/make no sense. why does sight require tight skin on the face? kindled twigs? what?
Re: the mattress is a magnet by silvertongueddevil	3-Sep-02/8:38 AM
a warm and welcoming magnet indeed.
Re: Equinox by timfowler	3-Sep-02/8:34 AM
it would be lovely if darness brought some stars along to serve as candlelight. what a romance.
Re: Conversation Piece by timfowler	3-Sep-02/7:49 AM
i'd remember it forever
Re: Ghosts II by timfowler	3-Sep-02/7:37 AM
are you one of these ghosts? or were you, until touched by that gentle hand?
Re: Just One More Time by KatieKaBoom	3-Sep-02/7:34 AM
oh! the last line is too weak. the rest of it is great, though.