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Ghosts II

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

In the swiftly fading light of passing autumn days lost summers' dancers linger in the air by steps and stages illuminated as distant fairy-tale. I am at last revealed: Paupers, not Princes, have been the cause of all my wasted tears: of all these wasted years. I have given of my body I have given of my soul. Tested and tempted Time after time returned alone from time's despair released. Yet now: a hand so simply offered reaches within me through past encircling thorns to break the spell and wake my sleeping heart

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[8] <~> 3-Sep-02/7:37 AM Reply
are you one of these ghosts? or were you, until touched by that gentle hand?