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Conversation Piece (Free verse) by timfowler
I speak to you:
You echo: return, replenish;
Ground that is so gained, so reclaimed
makes the gulf between us
the merest breath of air.
I hear you:
You spoke: discovered, dispelled;
walked the high tide's narrow mark,
brought doubt to break on rocks,
shining with salt spray.
You touch me:
I, fulfilled, freed
by childhood's gentle candour,
an essence drop by drop,
will remember tomorrow.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Weighted score: 4.809275
Overall Rank: 10997
Posted: September 3, 2002 2:43 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2002 2:43 AM PDT
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