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Life is freedom (Free verse) by trev086
Free as a bird, high as a plane
This idea you dreamed is just so lame.
Invisible walls acting as chains on our necks.
No way to break them except to take a step
This step is the key, the key to the chain.
Following the road which you think you live,
Will just bring you horrors and more problems to give.
Striving for peace will not come
So dream something more realistic, something like home.
Home there is family and family is good
Comforting you with troubles and putting away that hood.
Hiding your fears, moving backwards in life
Try to make the best of things and exit the light
Always walk forward with your head tilted high
Keeping you in front of that place we will untie.
Life is a knot being each problem we approach
There will be things in the way such as a roach.
Free as a bird, high a plane
The idea you dreamed was just a dream.
~Trevor Greene
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Weighted score: 4.809275
Overall Rank: 10998
Posted: September 4, 2002 6:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2002 6:08 PM PDT
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