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Life is freedom

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Sep 2002 · 0 comments

Free as a bird, high as a plane This idea you dreamed is just so lame. Invisible walls acting as chains on our necks. No way to break them except to take a step This step is the key, the key to the chain. Following the road which you think you live, Will just bring you horrors and more problems to give. Striving for peace will not come So dream something more realistic, something like home. Home there is family and family is good Comforting you with troubles and putting away that hood. Hiding your fears, moving backwards in life Try to make the best of things and exit the light Always walk forward with your head tilted high Keeping you in front of that place we will untie. Life is a knot being each problem we approach There will be things in the way such as a roach. Free as a bird, high a plane The idea you dreamed was just a dream. ~Trevor Greene

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