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Come tonight I'm waiting (Free verse) by kawakurdi
Come tonight I am waiting
I have lain my forehead
on the palm of anticipation.
It is you who is coming
It must be ! I am waiting.
If you do not come
the castle of my hope will collapse
If you do not come
I will dance on the stage of my desperation
throw my sorrows to the wind
and celebrate the burning of my heart
Come tonight I am waiting
All the world is a messenger
bringing to me the happy tidings of your coming.
My surroundings are alert ears
eliciting voices even from silence!
There is a footfall
There is a whisper
It is you who is coming
It must be! I am waiting
Every stirring of the wind is a swing
swaying the happy tidings of your coming
Every road is a flute
Playing the music of your steps
Every wall is a chime
Ringing the bell of your arrival
Every shadow parts like a soft lip
smiling for your reception
It is you who is coming
It must be! I am waiting.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7575
Posted: August 30, 2002 1:27 PM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2002 1:27 PM PDT
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