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Eahtatiene (Free verse) by 1Sapphire1
Her allure rests in the grace of her silhouette.
Yet her essential charm is the quickness of her smile.
Where does her heart lie?
Do I have a chance to be that lucky guy?
Her Hellenic eyes were caught on the spectrum between blue and yellow.
......Caution tinges my approach;
It doesn't seem to effect every other fellow.
The laughter in her voice betrays her youth.
I'd ask her out, except that would be so uncouth.
From a distance I circle, trying to find a way into her heart.
But I know time is short;
and this is tearing me apart.
I hope our friendship can catch fire.
But she considers me an "acquiantance",
not an object of desire.
Circumvent and attainment, this is my endeavor.
.......But I would be fortunate to just touch her life
because I am quite certain, that I will soon lose her forever.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7574
Posted: August 21, 2002 2:07 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 2:07 PM PDT
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