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How I Wish (Other) by DevilTmptrss How I wish to be within your arms.
How I wish to hear your voice.
How I wish that you were here.
How I wish I had a choice.
Wanting so much from me,
yet holding so much back.
You beg for me to tell you
of all the things you lack.
And how I wish that I were you,
or maybe just could see
all the things you hold so tight;
not wanting them to be
taken away or known by those
who might wound your heart.
That's over now, you'll never come,
it's been over from the start.
Up the ladder:
THEIR MOCCASINS
Down the ladder:
Eahtatiene
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Posted: August 6, 2002 3:25 PM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2002 3:25 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7574 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159
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6-Aug-02/8:53 PM
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Allow me to summarize. Verse 1: I miss you. Verse 2: You're insecure. Verse 3: I have limited skill at empathy. Verse 4: Some pseudo-mystical bullcrap. Well that was certainly worthy of poetry.
you sound to sweet to be anything
to do with the dark lord. ilike it its good.if it makes you feel somthing when you read it you have hit the spot.
Thats deep.
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