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A Musical Dream (Free verse) by vulcan Each time I hear Simon Boccanegra
A dream paralyzes my senses.
I'm pacing a catecomb in pensive strides
The Brooding-Silence on my back.
I feel somebody's approach,
I revive...
I look up in his eyes and mine grow salty
He presses my hand,
"I can not break the heart of darkness."
He says "I understand."
My hand faints down,he passes,
I stride away.
-simon Boccanegra is an opera by G.Verdi which is full of arias that are
sad,deep and impressive.
Up the ladder:
Come tonight I'm waiting
Down the ladder:
Sadness
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Posted: September 6, 2002 8:00 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2002 7:32 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7576 Comments:
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Amelia @ 198.146.143.170
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6-Sep-02/8:09 AM
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nice one vulcan.;-)
It's no Rocky Horror Picture Show but it will do....... I suppose. ;)
i might try that next time, but indeed it is not a poeme from the likes of say one chuk de negros! for he is the cadylist of all that's unlisted. fort.childhood.rockfight.quarrydive. 9/10...p.s wow! that's three good poims in a row....must of tipped a good rock over this morning cuz...these bugs are fat juicy and hav'n't seen the light of day in awhile.....after all jingoism saved the locknut but malthusian theories felled my uncles remus and romulus, and made hitler do the burning monk dance 'pon knees...care to dance?
I don't know much about Verdi, but this captures what impression I do have of it. Mysterious, heavy. Great
Thanks Christof!will you have a look at my"Beyond Imagination?"
nice one.. one of ur best i think vulcan...... and thks for ur comments
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