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Equinox (Free verse) by timfowler if night is equal
daylight at point of victory
or sliding defeat:
darkness, in balance,
has singular triumph
in coming alone
to the table
set with lilies.
Up the ladder:
Simile
Down the ladder:
I Didn't Know
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Posted: September 3, 2002 2:50 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2002 2:50 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0448236 Overall Rank: 6974 Comments:
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Christof @ 195.172.133.226
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3-Sep-02/3:13 AM
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I like the simple symbolism of this, the equilibrium achieved
it would be lovely if darness brought some stars along to serve as candlelight. what a romance.
I've read this poem over and over, and every time I get something different out of it. This is one of those instances where I may not fully grasp or clearly understand the full import what is being said â indeed, I may not have the capacity â but the poem is so beautifully crafted that I donât care. Gorgeous.
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