poemranker ::Equinox by timfowler

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Free verse № 12839

Equinox

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

if night is equal daylight at point of victory or sliding defeat: darkness, in balance, has singular triumph in coming alone to the table set with lilies.

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[8] Christof 3-Sep-02/3:13 AM Reply
I like the simple symbolism of this, the equilibrium achieved
[n/a] timfowler 3-Sep-02/5:38 AM Reply
thankyou.
[8] <~> 3-Sep-02/8:34 AM Reply
it would be lovely if darness brought some stars along to serve as candlelight. what a romance.
[9] tuthaliash 7-Jan-04/3:02 PM Reply
I've read this poem over and over, and every time I get something different out of it. This is one of those instances where I may not fully grasp or clearly understand the full import what is being said – indeed, I may not have the capacity – but the poem is so beautifully crafted that I don’t care. Gorgeous.