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I Didn't Know (Free verse) by Bonehiss
I didn't know, The end would come so soon, And things would be so tough. I didn't know, How far I'd gone for nothing, All I had was not enough. I didn't know, How to make you happy, Or the way to win your heart. I didn't know, It was even possible, To be so wrong, Right from the start. I didn't know, I could feel so empty, So lost without a clue, Until I finally realized, I didn't know, You.

Up the ladder: Equinox
Down the ladder: Osmosis on Parade

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6975
Posted: October 30, 2002 3:13 AM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2002 3:13 AM PST
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[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 30-Oct-02/7:43 AM | Reply
Good non-cheesy rhymes, crisp rhythms, a snappy ending - good.
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Jan-03/3:22 PM | Reply
yeah. that's what they all say. next.
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